Here is a love poem I wrote during the blizzard.
At the Reservoir
We gather the neighbors
for champagne and stand
outside in the quiet white that surrounds
the houses while we toast
the record storm of 2010,
and amid the clinks and the laughter
my eyes go toward the dark ridge
that makes the reservoir,
the water that connects you to me,
our thoughts that move underneath
snow and ice, underneath trees
and families, in a space where
we drift weightless and intertwined
making love in the way we can,
you blue-green and me red-brown,
and later that night I go inside
to gaze at your picture because
in the four hours since I’ve
last looked, I’ve forgotten your eyes,
you miles away, but I find you in the water,
your colors so close they turn black.
1 comment:
This is a really nice poem. I love how it jumps around with mixed metaphors to different subjects. Yet even though the objects are different, you still bring them together for something better. It reminds me of hopping from rock-to- rock when the creek was swollen from the rain on the farm. I was really happy when I reached the other side, and I would always look back to see where I had been - just like when I read your poem.
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